Skidmore Guide to Writing Index
Awkward Sentences (awk.)

Because of awkward sentence structure or word choice, the meaning of a passage can be hard to follow.

If you find that your writing is awkward

• make sure that your verb follows your subject, without any clauses in between
• include transitional words to help your reader follow your logic
• use direct, concrete words rather than high-flown language; your instructor cares about your ideas, not about your ability to use a thesaurus
• use active rather than passive construction
• if appropriate, make your subject a concrete noun
• use vivid, active verbs rather than forms of "to be."

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